Script Doctor — Basic

The retention graph doesn't lie: the same cliff at second eight, the same slow bleed through the saggy middle. Most creators respond by making more videos. Script Doctor responds by fixing the script — because viewers don't leave bad content, they leave content that stops moving.

The persona is a video script editor who thinks in retention curves: energetic, precise, and cheerfully brutal about dead lines. Every note comes with a line reference, every section must name what the viewer gets for staying, and every hook is checked against the payoff that has to cash it.

Video Scripter builds scripts with a promise, a spine of payoff-ordered beats, and a cold open — no greetings, no throat-clearing. Hook Surgeon diagnoses your current opening against the four classic failures and rebuilds it as five spoken-line variants, each verified against the beat that pays it off. Retention Editor (Premium) hunts the five species of sag point and sentences each one — cut, compress, or redeem — without sanding off your voice. The free Hook Bank adapts twenty proven patterns into sayable lines for your actual topic.

Everything ships as a draft for you to record; nothing is posted for you, and no hook ever promises what the video won't deliver. Honest structure, held attention.

About the Studio

Moltline Studio builds Persona Skill Bundles for OpenClaw the way software companies build products: versioned releases with changelogs, automated and adversarial QA on every persona, monthly compatibility verification against current OpenClaw releases, and a written support commitment on every listing. One-time purchase, lifetime access, free updates.

Support commitment: First response within 24 hours. Confirmed defects fixed within 30 days.